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A Broken Friendship

Tue Jan 13, 2004, 7:32 PM
This is a story i wrote for one of my bestest friends....

I made it up while i was going.. when i was iming her on Aim.. this is how it went...

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sorayumed: there once.. was a girl

sorayumed: she dreamt that she saw a ghost

sorayumed: she asked the ghost, "am i dreaming?"

sorayumed: and the ghost said, " yes you are"

sorayumed: and the she asked, "are you here to tell me something?"

sorayumed: and it said, "Yes i am"

sorayumed: then she asked, "Is my love life going to come back to life after all these
years?! " O_O

sorayumed: and it said...

sorayumed: " haha no .. what do you think i am?! a fairy?!"

sorayumed: it laughed and tried to hack her head of with it's long sword thing!

sorayumed: then she woke up

sorayumed: and she said

sorayumed: " i'm so glad that was a dream "

sorayumed: then she looked into the mirror in her bathroom to find a pretty big cut on her
neck

sorayumed: she gasped and saw a shadow in the mirror

sorayumed: " Dreams can be true if you're sleeping "

sorayumed: ....

sorayumed: Years later...

sorayumed: her cousin: ... i'm telling you.. she never awoke after that night....

sorayumed: her guy cousin: .. damn .. died at 22?.. sad sad sad

sorayumed: the old wise man said:

sorayumed: " A dream is a dream, but if you refuse to wake up.. it'll be real... and you
will sleep on forever..."

sorayumed: The old hag.. aka the wife O_O of the wise man!

sorayumed: .. the old hag:

sorayumed: " Shut up you old fart.... she was love sick"

sorayumed: old man: " Well shut up.. you yabble too much "

sorayumed: her: " OH YOU'RE TELLING ME WHAT TO DO?! "

sorayumed: him: " -.- man she got it lucky.. never having to marry somone"

sorayumed: her soul remained gone and lost in the mist of a world between the living and
dead

sorayumed: she was alone

sorayumed: not amoung angels or devils

sorayumed: she was lost and couldn't find her way back

sorayumed: she could see the one she loved...

sorayumed: she couldn't see her own figure

sorayumed: she couldn't feel the breeze

sorayumed: not the mist of water

sorayumed: forever thristy...

sorayumed: forever starving

sorayumed: everything went through her

sorayumed: she couldn't feel nor see...

sorayumed: the only she could do

sorayumed: was hear....

sorayumed: everyday that lonely spirit went back to the old abandoned house

sorayumed: about 1000 years old...

sorayumed: and went back to the same mirror

sorayumed: on the exact 1001th day.. from her death and the abandoning of the home....

sorayumed: she found herself in the mirror

sorayumed: with that ghost talking to her

sorayumed: he said

sorayumed: "You believed in love and it took you.... "

sorayumed: her: " I do love him, i do"

sorayumed: him: " you can't love someone if you..."

sorayumed: he stopped...

sorayumed: she urged him to go on....

sorayumed: meanwhile... her real self was watching intently and thought

sorayumed: " i don't remember this "

sorayumed: the ghost pulled off his clock and sighed

sorayumed: she gasped and started to cry

sorayumed: " why..."

sorayumed: she looked into the mirror to stare at herself.. and her love...

sorayumed: he said solemnly: " you never really loved me..."

x Shizue x: gasp

x Shizue x: a twist!

sorayumed: she answered: " the old man was right..."

sorayumed: she sighed: " If love is not believed in.. it will be just but a dream"

sorayumed: and he said:

sorayumed: " And a dream is what i want you to be in... live with me.. in this dream..."

sorayumed: she looked up: " to die and live with you?"

sorayumed: he smiled: " i'm not dead "

sorayumed: " .. am.. i dead...?"

sorayumed: he looked away: " I thought it would work out.. but 1000 years? "

sorayumed: she looked down: " you're tired of it..."

sorayumed: he nodded and said:

sorayumed: " i can't take back life... but i can take back love "

sorayumed: she held his hand and started crying

sorayumed: " no you can't.. i've waiting for so long.... i thought you truly left me.. but.. to
know you've been here all along! "

sorayumed: he shook off her hand and pulled the black cloak over himself

sorayumed: " I'm off again..."

sorayumed: he disappeared...

sorayumed: and she sobbed...

sorayumed: she looked at the mirror

sorayumed: and saw a broken down.. dusty.. bathroom.. like hers...

sorayumed: and she looked at hers...

sorayumed: it was all white...

sorayumed: empty feeling...

sorayumed: and she thought...

sorayumed: " wasn't i just watching...? O_O.. what?! "

sorayumed: she noticed then

sorayumed: that she had trapped her present self with her past

sorayumed: and the love of her life...

sorayumed: left ...

sorayumed: forever...

sorayumed: she was alone...

sorayumed: ...

sorayumed: she fell to the ground

sorayumed: and sobbed...

sorayumed: trapped

sorayumed: for an eternity

sorayumed: ...

sorayumed: he soared across the moonlit sky

sorayumed: and across his tear filled face

sorayumed: came a smile...

sorayumed: he started cackling

sorayumed: and stopped.. floating in midair

sorayumed: he thought to himself...

sorayumed: " Heh... one down.. one more to go "

sorayumed: he slowly went down to a door and changed into a normal guy again...

sorayumed: he knocked on the door

sorayumed: and a quite beatiful girl came out

sorayumed: her: " Oh! you're back! where's yumeki? "

sorayumed: him: " She decided to break it off ... um.. do you wanna go for a drink? "

sorayumed: her: " Sure "

sorayumed: ....

sorayumed: A friendship was broken.. so was a heart.. but the evil still spreaded and love
was a bond that was unrequited...

sorayumed: ...

sorayumed: Yumeki: *sobs*

sorayumed: her: " A friendship should always last... no matter... what..."

sorayumed: she couldn't believe that she trusted him... and not

sorayumed: her best friend

sorayumed: so her travel through the past, present, and future...

sorayumed: showed her.. that she was doomed....

sorayumed: ... so was her beloved friend...

sorayumed: and the feeder of hearts...

sorayumed: the devil amoung true friendship

sorayumed: and the lusty fake lover...

sorayumed: was just...

sorayumed: the dream that came to be true..

sorayumed: the dream.. that was a night mare

sorayumed: ...

sorayumed: he was what we call now... " Doubt"

sorayumed: Her best friend took his hand... and he smiled ...

sorayumed: ...

sorayumed: The End

sorayumed: .. yup that's it



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and that .. was my story... .. *Sighs*.. scary..


haha ^_^

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Comments


:iconzanzibar-jones:
thx 4 cmmt.
Sorry, I took so long to finish your gift.
It's somewhere in my gallery.
:iconsorayumeki:
Man i gotta start scanninng my drawings...

.. henry you get out of here -.- never look at this site!


T-T


dammit....


... this totally ruins my plan of wreckage and my simple way of being a messed up person....

*sighs*

Life is cruel...
:iconshizue:
heya dori :D nice poems ^^ keep up the good work and keep posting! unlike me, who is lazy :-D w00t.
:iconsorayumeki:
Listening to Maroon 5's CD now...

"Songs About Jane"

yup...


Here's a poem i made... while listening..



What makes you who you are?
What makes me love you so?
That i can answer still...
And I know it's true.

Why do i stop this run so far?
Why does my boiling blood still flow,
when i still feel the definite chill?
What makes me love you?

Am i old enough?
Can i understand?
Can i lift you up high?
Can i bring you up like i brought you down?

I'm too young... for love.
When will these feelings mend?
These tears i always cry...
day after day, when will it all turn around?

One way or another,
i'm losing it all with you.
Losing my grip, my hold.
Losing it ... losing me...

Can't hold on much longer,
there's not another way anymore.
My heart crumbles and folds,
but it's the best way to be.

I'm letting it go like paper...
I'm showing no emotion.
if so, i'm gonna smile.
I'm gonna laugh when i do.

My heart simply wavers,
my lost yet deep devotion.
Gone i will seem for awhile,
but it's done for you...

For you i shall stop and take hold.
For you i will stand in this cold.
For you i will give up and fold.
For you i shall take back what i told.

Through this door i shall walk again,
take my hand out of yours finally.
Tell you i have no more feelings...

Would you believe me?....

I'll treat you as if it were the end,

This love i shall kill,
despite my own will.
The one way chill,
defying heart thrill...

This way i shall start,
and break my own heart.
For you i will break this apart.

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